别人求的几道中翻英,我自己写出来总觉得语法有问题,帮我看看
楼主我直接帮你改了，解析看后面
Today, i made milk tea. With my mother's help, i finally prepared the material. First, I soaked a bag of black tea with half a cup of water. Then i put sugar in the tea. The tea was hot, so the sugar quickly dissolved. Pouring the milk inside the cup, i blended the tea and the milk. It was near completion. After a few minutes, i took some ice from the refrigerator and placed them in the milk tea. I finished. In the future I would like to drink my selfmade milk tea.
第一行：固定词组：start doing something or start to do something
with someone's help
句子太长，应该断开来。i finally ready material没有动词。
第二行：first, i soaked a bag of black tea. the tea's water is cup's half 有点点累赘。
then put sugar in the tea 没有主语。后面那句话（because....)这样子接太长了。最好不要用because 做句子的开头。
第三行：then pour the milk inside the cup 没主语。tea and milk together....没动词。
第四行：wait a few minutes 不应该用祈使句，你不是在告诉别人做什么而是在陈述你自己在做什么，用陈述句。ice from the....没主语，时态要保持一致，用过去式就通篇用过去时。
第五行：finished 和最后一句话完全没有联系，要断开。
其他还有一些地方我自己认为改掉好一点，楼主介意的话就改回来吧，那些地方都不是语法错误，包括改变句子开头之类的。要记得一句句子里面必须有主语和动词，除非是祈使句，而这是一篇陈述问，所以不应该有祈使句的出现。另外记得保持时态一致。
and play games with them
1.我的一个朋友很喜欢这个电视剧,所以她建议我也看看,慢慢的我也喜欢上了One of my friends likes this TV-play and he suggested me to watch it. I am getting to like it now.
2.你认为这个玩具怎么样,我不是很喜欢,不过明天没准会买一个
what do you think of this toy, I don't like it so much but maybe I will buy on tomorrow.
3.昨天我和同事还说起它(这件事)
I talked with my colleagues about this issue yesterday.
4.你的朋友为什么会建议你去那里呢,有什么特别之处么
Why did you friend suggest you to go there? Anything special?
5.你为什么会来这呢,有什么东西很吸引你么
Whe did you come here? Something attractive?
补冲
2: .........I will buy it tommorrow
5：
why are you here?(what brings you here?)
anything interesting?
用词霸豆豆,很好用
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