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恳请各位英语帝帮忙斧正一下~

During the "12.5"period, China will remain a large-scale investment in railway construction. Expected to the end of "12.5 " period, China's railway mileage will reach 120,000 kilometers or more. Although many Chinese enterprises have already have "jumped on the " high-speed rail, but in the end supporting areas, the absence of supporting domestic enterprises, it should lead to more attention.

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For the past few years there have been more and more students ignored the study of Chinese.Now let us discuss why they became like this.First of all we can watch more and more English movies and listen to more and more English song(s) though Internet (which) make English become popular.Secondly,the education of our country made English become very important to the students.If you are not good at English you can’t go to a good college. The last but not the least, there are a lot of companies in our country deal with foreigner business afairs, they need many people who know English well to work for them.
In my opinion,though, English is very useful today,we should not ignore Chinese study because it is our mother tongue.It keep(s) us remember who I am. In the near future that Chinese become will be more useful than English and the foreigners have to learn Chinese well in order to do business with us.
文章很紧凑，结构严谨，如果能考到这个作文楼主肯定能拿高分，有几个小错误帮楼主改正了，有些加了括弧有些没加，希望楼主再看看
另外祝你好运，顺利过级，加油！

During the 12th Five-year program,the goverment will continue to invent to the railroads constructure great amout of money of almost the same scale as the last year's,it is estimated that the total mileage of railroads in china will be over 1.2 billion miles by the end of the 12th Five -year program.though a great many of national corporations in china have "boarded" the high-speed railways,the long-time absence of cordinating corporations in the high-end area should gain more public concern.
旁注：十二五计划翻译应该是the 12th Five-year program 铁路总里程是the total mileage
配套企业应该是cordinating corporations ///SUPPORT表达的意思主要是提供材料服务什么的，不能完全表达配套的意思，配套的意思有量身定做的意思，用CORDINATE才能较好的符合这层意思

During 12·5 , China will keep on investingin railway construction on a large scale . It is expected that by the end of 12·5, the overall length of China Railway will reach over 12 thousand kilometer. Although lots of Chinese companies have boared the high-speed trains, in superior mating area, the absence of such relevant company in our nation should draw more attention.

"1025" period, China railway construction will maintain large-scale investment. Expected "1025" final, China railways will reach to 12 million kilometers above. Although, many Chinese enterprises have in succession "build on the" high iron, but in high-end matching fields, domestic related enterprise's absence, more should cause more attention.

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