求一篇高考英语作文(用作高考备份用)高手请入

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高考英语作文 英语高手请进 请写一篇高考英语作文.题材不限.字数不限 是整篇作文,不是段落句子~

Crying for your merciful help!
All respected sir/madam,
I am zhangsan ,a pathetic and hard-working butcher who is 58 years old ,from Hunan Province ,Chenzhou City.
Last month, when I was killing a pig ,all of a sudden ,I fell onto the ground unconsciously.At this moment ,my wife hurriedly sent me to see a doctor .Unfortunately ,the doctor told me that I suffered from lung cancer ,which was in late stage.
And the doctor reminded me again and again,”If you don’t take a timely and overall treatment,you will die within one and half years!”
But worse still, I have little money ,which is radically enough for my treatment in the hospital,for the treatment expense is tremendously high beyond my ability.
So ,here I am crying for your merciful help!
My bank account is :11919 119119 20120120.
Thanks a billion for your mercy again!
God blesses you!

Zhangsan
2011-4-3



我给人写的演讲稿
Environment is my top concern
Nowadays ,with the fantastic spurt of science and technolody,people worldwide are now live in a terrifically wonderful world of unprecedent prosperity!
Here ,I cannot help asking :what is your top concern in your deep heart ,from now on?
Your pocket?
Your lover??
Your shares jumping up and down???
No!
As for me , my top concern is nothing more than the environment,a great presence bound up with all living creatures on our unique planet!!
As we can see,we now live in a progressively thriving world.However,we still are threatened by so many new rising serious problems at the same time!
Now ,let me take the booming tourism for example please! On the one hand, tourism, as one of the most promising industries in the 21st century, provides people with the great opportunity to see everything there is to see and to go any place there is to go. It has become a lifestyle for some people, and has turned out to be the driving force in GDP growth. It has the magic to turn a backward town into a wonderland of prosperity. But on the other hand, many problems can occur unexpectedly!
And the environmental problems rising from tourism are getting even worse than ever before!
In some districts,the environment has been largely contaminated:millions of tons of wastes are pouring into the environment alarmingly;the deforestation are still proceeding;the conservation areas of wild animals are disturbingly declining ……As a result ,the contradiction of the native people and wild lifes is deteriorating,so much so that the number of the people compelled to see a doctor are increasing tremendously!
At this point,it is high time that we adopted all possible and effective measures to cope well with this problem ,so as to make ourselves live in harmony with our environment!
So ,are you still hesitating?Let’s go hand in hand to make all things go right!


我给你谈谈怎样写作文吧
写作是本人的老本行!!六级作文115,我的英语老师多次在班上向同学推介我的作文,我的作文没有语法错误,有很多高级词汇。在这里跟阁下分享下吧
对于作文,我说的最多的就是:不走寻常路!你不要以为在网上下载那些所谓的优秀作文,拿来背背,你就成为高手了,其实大错特错!因为我看了之后也觉得一般,甚至有些拙劣,哗众取宠的味道,比如有的所谓优秀作文竟然还用什么be good at ,importance,very much,depend on,in my opinion ,completely 这样低等的写作词汇,说它低等,那是因为这些词汇已经广为人知,阅卷老师已经看的麻木不仁了!
要写出高人一等的作文,我觉得并不难,只要你有一定的语法基础和一定量的写作词汇(越高级越好),写作句型,就足可以应对常规的高考,四六级考试……(我记得高中25分满分的作文我可以保持在21-23这个级别,四六级的作文都是110多分)
首先是语法,在你的语法达到一定层次之后,你就可以追求更多的变化了,比如,用虚拟语气句型it is high time that we……代替常用的it is necessary that we should……,又如用倒装句代替常见的平铺直叙等,这样可以增加你的语法亮点,让已经有些麻木一直想睡觉的阅卷老师眼睛一亮,在你的试卷上多扫射一番!
其次,是词汇,我觉得,在你的语法达到基本不会出错的程度上,作文便应该以词汇取胜,因为在这个层次上,大家的语法都差不多,没什么变化,唯一有变化的就是你的词汇!给你打个比方吧,很多想到“许多”就用many,但是你别忘了many a ;handsome;massive,innumerable,a multitude of ;很多人想到“专家”就写expert,但很少人会想到specialist,很多人在想到“擅长”这词,就写be good at ,却不知还有更高级的表达法:be expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才,就体现在这些细微的差别上!
再次,是怎么将文章润色,从而使你的文章大放异彩!!关于这方面,我觉得我自己使用最多的,也是我自创的------叫做“添油加醋”,包括如下几个方面:尽可能地在形容词前使用副词,在介词短语中加入适当的形容词和副词,在过去分词前加入副词,在名词之前尽可能多用形容词……,总之就是尽可能地使用形容词和副词。我觉得这样做有一个好处,那就是使原本干巴巴的句子变得血肉丰满,比如:
1.The regular physical exercise contributes to our health 改成The regular physical exercise contributes tremendously to our health!
2.In my opinion,the driver’s carelessness should be responsible for this road accident改成
3For my part,the driver‘s negligence should be dominantly responsible for this unexpectedly horrible accident
4The majority of students believe that the part-time job will provide them with more oppportunities to develop their interpersonal skills改成The majority of students firmly believe that the part-time job will undoubtedly provide them with golden opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills tremendously!
………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
最后,我建议你,平时读报,或者做题的时候,发现有好的句子好的词汇,你要抄下来,长期下来,你的作文会有提高的,需要说明的是,这个提高过程可能很缓慢,但是最后能收到很好的效果,以前25分的作文我都能保证在21-23这个级别,靠的就是对语法的熟练掌握和积累了许多较高级的词汇,句型,句子。

高考英语作文的类型包括:书信类、看图写作文类、话题类等。
表格式书面表达是近年高考常选的命题方式之一,而且,所用体裁也相对稳定,以记叙文、应用文、说明文为主;题材多种多样,有书信、日记、介绍、通知等。
考生只需根据表格里的提示内容,确定所要表达的要点,最后运用自己所掌握的句型和词语知识,写出一篇要点全、语句通、条理清、表达明、思路活、书写正的短文。



扩展资料:
高考英语中完形填空考察的知识和能力:
1、快速阅读理解能力
在考试中,阅读理解是限时阅读。它主要考查考生两个方面的阅读理解能力:快速阅读能力和准确的理解能力。也就是说,考生在英语阅读理解过程中,阅读速度要快,理解的准确度要高,二者缺一不可。
2、文章体裁辨析能力
英语中,由于不同文体的英语文章有不同的写作方法。如果考生具备了识别英文文体的能力,能根据文体特征迅速抓住文章的要点,就会大大缩短阅读时间,提高理解效率。
参考资料来源:百度百科--高考外语

Crying for your merciful help!
All respected sir/madam,
I am zhangsan ,a pathetic and hard-working butcher who is 58 years old ,from Hunan Province ,Chenzhou City.
Last month, when I was killing a pig ,all of a sudden ,I fell onto the ground unconsciously.At this moment ,my wife hurriedly sent me to see a doctor .Unfortunately ,the doctor told me that I suffered from lung cancer ,which was in late stage.
And the doctor reminded me again and again,”If you don’t take a timely and overall treatment,you will die within one and half years!”
But worse still, I have little money ,which is radically enough for my treatment in the hospital,for the treatment expense is tremendously high beyond my ability.
So ,here I am crying for your merciful help!
My bank account is :11919 119119 20120120.
Thanks a billion for your mercy again!
God blesses you!

Zhangsan
2011-4-3

我给人写的演讲稿
Environment is my top concern
Nowadays ,with the fantastic spurt of science and technolody,people worldwide are now live in a terrifically wonderful world of unprecedent prosperity!
Here ,I cannot help asking :what is your top concern in your deep heart ,from now on?
Your pocket?
Your lover??
Your shares jumping up and down???
No!
As for me , my top concern is nothing more than the environment,a great presence bound up with all living creatures on our unique planet!!
As we can see,we now live in a progressively thriving world.However,we still are threatened by so many new rising serious problems at the same time!
Now ,let me take the booming tourism for example please! On the one hand, tourism, as one of the most promising industries in the 21st century, provides people with the great opportunity to see everything there is to see and to go any place there is to go. It has become a lifestyle for some people, and has turned out to be the driving force in GDP growth. It has the magic to turn a backward town into a wonderland of prosperity. But on the other hand, many problems can occur unexpectedly!
And the environmental problems rising from tourism are getting even worse than ever before!
In some districts,the environment has been largely contaminated:millions of tons of wastes are pouring into the environment alarmingly;the deforestation are still proceeding;the conservation areas of wild animals are disturbingly declining ……As a result ,the contradiction of the native people and wild lifes is deteriorating,so much so that the number of the people compelled to see a doctor are increasing tremendously!
At this point,it is high time that we adopted all possible and effective measures to cope well with this problem ,so as to make ourselves live in harmony with our environment!
So ,are you still hesitating?Let’s go hand in hand to make all things go right!

我给你谈谈怎样写作文吧
写作是本人的老本行!!六级作文115,我的英语老师多次在班上向同学推介我的作文,我的作文没有语法错误,有很多高级词汇。在这里跟阁下分享下吧
对于作文,我说的最多的就是:不走寻常路!你不要以为在网上下载那些所谓的优秀作文,拿来背背,你就成为高手了,其实大错特错!因为我看了之后也觉得一般,甚至有些拙劣,哗众取宠的味道,比如有的所谓优秀作文竟然还用什么be good at ,importance,very much,depend on,in my opinion ,completely 这样低等的写作词汇,说它低等,那是因为这些词汇已经广为人知,阅卷老师已经看的麻木不仁了!
要写出高人一等的作文,我觉得并不难,只要你有一定的语法基础和一定量的写作词汇(越高级越好),写作句型,就足可以应对常规的高考,四六级考试……(我记得高中25分满分的作文我可以保持在21-23这个级别,四六级的作文都是110多分)
首先是语法,在你的语法达到一定层次之后,你就可以追求更多的变化了,比如,用虚拟语气句型it is high time that we……代替常用的it is necessary that we should……,又如用倒装句代替常见的平铺直叙等,这样可以增加你的语法亮点,让已经有些麻木一直想睡觉的阅卷老师眼睛一亮,在你的试卷上多扫射一番!
其次,是词汇,我觉得,在你的语法达到基本不会出错的程度上,作文便应该以词汇取胜,因为在这个层次上,大家的语法都差不多,没什么变化,唯一有变化的就是你的词汇!给你打个比方吧,很多想到“许多”就用many,但是你别忘了many a ;handsome;massive,innumerable,a multitude of ;很多人想到“专家”就写expert,但很少人会想到specialist,很多人在想到“擅长”这词,就写be good at ,却不知还有更高级的表达法:be expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才,就体现在这些细微的差别上!
再次,是怎么将文章润色,从而使你的文章大放异彩!!关于这方面,我觉得我自己使用最多的,也是我自创的------叫做“添油加醋”,包括如下几个方面:尽可能地在形容词前使用副词,在介词短语中加入适当的形容词和副词,在过去分词前加入副词,在名词之前尽可能多用形容词……,总之就是尽可能地使用形容词和副词。我觉得这样做有一个好处,那就是使原本干巴巴的句子变得血肉丰满,比如:
1.The regular physical exercise contributes to our health 改成The regular physical exercise contributes tremendously to our health!
2.In my opinion,the driver’s carelessness should be responsible for this road accident改成
3For my part,the driver‘s negligence should be dominantly responsible for this unexpectedly horrible accident
4The majority of students believe that the part-time job will provide them with more oppportunities to develop their interpersonal skills改成The majority of students firmly believe that the part-time job will undoubtedly provide them with golden opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills tremendously!
………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
最后,我建议你,平时读报,或者做题的时候,发现有好的句子好的词汇,你要抄下来,长期下来,你的作文会有提高的,需要说明的是,这个提高过程可能很缓慢,但是最后能收到很好的效果,以前25分的作文我都能保证在21-23这个级别,靠的就是对语法的熟练掌握和积累了许多较高级的词汇,句型,句子。


1. 表示原因
There are three reasons for this
The reasons for this are as follows
The reason for this is obvious
The reason for this is not far to seek
The reason for this is that
We have good reason to believe that
Example:
There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly,people’s living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly, most people are well paid, and they can afford what they need or like. Last but not least, more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.

2.表示措施
We should take some effective measures.
We should try our best to overcome(conquer) the difficulties.
We should do our utmost in doing sth.
We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with.
Example:
The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious. Therefore, we must take some effective measures to solve it.
3.表示事实,现状
We cannot ignore the fact that….
No one can deny the fact that …
There is no denying the fact that…
This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.
However, that’s not the case.
Example:
We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution. To solve these problems, we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution. The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment.
4.表示看法
People have(take,adopt, assume) different attitudes towards sth.
People have different opinions on this problem.
People take different views of (on)the question
Some people believe that …Others argue that…
Example:
People have different attitudes toward failure. Some believe that failure leads to success.
Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewd endeavor. However, others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers.
5.表示结论
In short, it can be said that…
It may be briefly summed up as follows.
From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that…
Example:
From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that examination is necessary, however, its method should be improved.

6.套语
It’s well known to us that….
As is known to us….
This is a topic that is being widely talked about.
From the graph(table, chart ) listed above, it can be seen that
As a proverb says,”Where there is a will, there is a way, there is a way”
Example:
As is well known to us, it is important for the students to know the world outside campus.
The reason for this is obvious. Nowadays, the society is changing and developing rapidly, and the campus is no longer an “ivory tower”. As college students, we must get in touch with the world outside the campus. Only in this way can we adapt ourselves to the society quickly after we graduate.
Does it pay to be honest? This is a topic that is being widely talked about and different people have different opinions on it.

引出话题:
1.Recently,the problem of ... has aroused people's concern.
最近,...的问题引起了人们的关注。
2.Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
互联网在我们的生活中起到了越来越重要的作用,它带来了很多便利,但也引起了很多问题。
3.Nowadays, ... has become a problem we have to face.
如今,...已经成为我们必须面对的问题。
4.It is commonly believe that...
人们一般认为...
5.Many people insist that...
很多人坚持认为...
6.With the development of science and technology more and more people believe that...
随着科学的发展,越来越多的人认为...
引出不同观点:
1.People's views on ... vary from person person.Some hold that ... However,others believe that...
人们对...的观点因人而异,有些人认为...,然而其他人却认为...。
2.Attitudes towards ... vary from person to person.
人们对待...的态度因人而异。
3.There are different opinions among people as to...
关于...人们的观点大不相同。
4.Different people hold different attitudes towards failure.
对(失败),人们的态度各不相同。
得出结论:
1.Taking all these factors into consideration,we naturally come to the conclusion that...
把这些因素都考虑进去,我们自然地就得出结论。
2.Taking into account all these factors,we may reasonably come to the conclusion that...
把所有的因素都考虑进去,我们可能会得出合理的结论。
3.There is no doubt that(job-hopping)has its draw backs,as well as merits.
毫无疑问,(跳槽)既有缺点,又有有点。
4.All in all,we can’t live with out...,but at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.
总之,我们没有...是无法生活的。但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决方法来对付可能出现的新问题。
提出建议:
1.It is high time that we put an end to the trend.
该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。
2.It is time to take the advice of ... and to put special emphasis on the improvement of ...
该是采纳...的建议,并对...的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。
3.There's no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of ...
毫无疑问,对...问题应予以重视。
4.Obviously, ... if we want to do something ... ,it is essential that...
显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是...
5.Only in this way can we ...
只有这样,我们才能...
6.It must be realized that ...
我们必须意识到...

例文:
Advertisements in Our Life

[1] We live in a world of advertisements. We see and hear them everywhere. No one can avoid being influenced by advertisements. Radio, television and computers have made it possible for advertisements to attract the attention of millions of people. Therefore, it has become an important part of our daily life.
[2] On one hand, advertising greatly promotes sales,on the other hand, in their efforts to tell people about products and events, advertisements provide us with a large amount of the latest information. Meanwhile, to make an advertisement, a lot of people will have to work together. So with the development of advertising a lot of jobs are being created.
[3] In a word, advertising is an important business.

Rural Education

[1] Now in the rural areas, there are many children out of school. I think one of the reasons is that their families are too poor to afford their schooling. As a result, they have to stay at home to earn money to support their families. Another reason is that many parents think it’s useless for the girls to study and they would not like them to go to school. The third reason is that some children are not interested in their lessons, and would not like to go to school.
[2] In my opinion, all children including girls should have the chance to receive an education. People should pay more attention to the education of children because they will play a very important part in the future of our country.

My School
I study in the No. I middle school, where there are three grades and thirty-two classes. It is not big but very beautiful.
In the center of the school there is a new teaching building, which is very clean and beautiful. The lab building and the library are to the east of the new building. There all kinds of book in the library. You can enioy them as many as you like.
South of the new building lies a playground and it's very big. On the playground, you can have sports such as football. basketball. You'd better play basketball as there are four basketball grounds in our school, You can enjoy yourself very much.
There are many trees in our school.Grass is everywhere. In front of the new building there are two gardens in which, there are flowers of all colours.
We are studying hard in our school, Our life is happy and intcrcsting. I love our school very much.
我的学校
我就读于一中。学校有3个年级,32个班,它并不大,但是很漂亮。
校园中央是新建成的干净、美丽的教学大楼。实验楼和图书楼在新楼的东侧。图书馆有各种各样的书,你可以随意阅读。操场在新楼的南边,它很大,你可以在操场上做你喜欢的运动,如足球、篮球。你最好打篮球——因为学校共有四块篮球场地——你一定会玩得十分尽兴。
学校种了许多树木,草坪随处可见。新楼的前面有两个花园;园里的鲜花五颜六色。
我们学习刻苦,生活愉快而有趣。我爱我们的学校。

原创,120词:

Dear Amy,

You have a difficult decision indeed! Both Beijing and Xi'an are wonderful cities, and if you get the chance, you should try to visit both. Personally, though, I recommend Xi'an. I am a resident there myself, and I love it for its rich history and culture. I bet you've heard of some of the renowned buildings and artifacts here. However, though there are so many attractions here, as well as many great universities and educational resources, the living costs are still much lower than those in Beijing. Tuition and rent are both more affordable. In addition, if you do come, I could be your Chinese tutor, free of charge!

Hope you have a great time, wherever you choose to go.

Regards,
Hua Li

额,,我以为是中考的,,我才初三,,心有余而力不足,,飘过、、、

?????《《《《《《《《《《《》》》》》》》》》》》!!!!!!!!!!
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