初中英语书面表达高手进！最迟明天早上10.00
My favourite pop star is Zhou Huajian.He was born in Hong Kong on December 22,1960.I like him not only because he is very handsome, but also his songs are very beautiful.
On October 18, he gave a performance in Tianjin. About 2500 fans went to the stadium to see him. Almost all of them were students. Some of them were even from Beijing, the capital city of China ,which is about 200 kilometres from Tianjin. I really wanted to watch the performance,but unfortunately,I didn't get a ticket. So I watched him on TV.
Zhou is one of the most popular stars in China. He is living in Hong Kong. His family is very happy. He has a good wife and three lovely children. He liked playing football when he was a university student. However, he has no time to play football now.
I hope he will be happy all his life, for he is loved by all of us.
流行歌手
周华健是我最欣赏的流行乐坛的歌手。他于1960年12月22日出生在香港。他不仅相貌英俊，而且唱得很动听，因此我很喜欢他。
10月18日他在天津举办了一次演唱会。2500多名歌迷前往观看，他们大多是学生。有些人甚至是从200公里外的首都北京赶来的。我多想去看演出呀，但遗憾的是我没买到票，所以只好从电视上观看了。
周华健是中国流行歌坛最受欢迎的歌手之一。他现在住在香港。他有一个幸福的家庭：有个贤惠的妻子和3个可爱的孩子。大学时代的他很爱踢足球，然而现在他却无暇踢球了。
我希望他一生快乐，因为他是我们深爱的歌星。
如果有错误请谅解，祝你学习进步，加油哦~~@~~
帮你修改如下:
During this period, I have learnt a lot.
Actually, everything is unforgettable, especially Rumbert's conscientiousness, Bradon's sense of humor, Fatima's kindness. I have learnt a lot from the daily talk of Fatima's lesson. Not only the knowledge itself but also some important philosophic theories. I really want to say---thanks a million, Mr Balinge.
简要说明,表达某某人的尽责,应该用名词形式,所以帮你改过来了.因为你想夸的其实是Bradon的幽默感,所以帮你改成了sense of humor,形容某某人亲切友好一般用kindness.哲理是philosophic theory, philosophy一般是指哲学.后面是一些形式上的小变化,希望你喜欢.
The book called <Man and Nature> talks about how to protect the environment.And the price of the book is 12 yuan.It is fit of middle school students .I hope everyone read it and we will talk about it next Monday afternoon.I think everyone will like it after you read it.That's all,Thouk you!
hello,everyone!it's my duty today!i plan to inrtoduce a book to you.
it's name is <<man and nature>>,at a price of 12 yuan.its topic is about
how to protect the environment.the book is fit for middle school students
like us.i will read it first,then we can have a discussion in the afternoon
of monday.i hope you will like it.
Today, I would like to introduct you a new book which I bought from the bookstore nearby. Its name is <Man and Nature>.
It's a book about environment, and cost me 12 yuan. After reading it, I think it fit for junior middle school students very much. Please read the book and we will start a discussion on next Monday afternoon.
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