自己写的英文小短文，请帮忙改错，初学者
在这里求助还不如找些英语强些的来呢~
1. pleasing 改为pleased
2. meet改为met
3. also后加for
4. sent后的them去掉 (them后的tou应该为to，相信是打错)
5. were后的that改为what
6. by your letter的by改为in
7. little改为few
8. your family的your改为my
9. write后加back
10.what改为how
What have you been up to?
I have been busy preparing for the PETS examination lately, which will be held on 14 Sep 2013.
I must go to work during daytime and look after my baby at night.
I have just signed up for an English class on the net-school. (对不起问一下，你说的net-school是指什么，英文单词里没有这个词). I want to learn English from scratch.
The other day, I suddenly felt sick and really uncomfortable, especially at my neck area. I wanted to check in to the hospital but I was too busy. I am feeling better, although I think that I need to take some rest still. (你最后一句想表达的是什么？你以上的意思能读为“我现在已感觉好多了，我想我需要休息。” 语句有点不通顺。)
on the days不是你要表达的意思，可以用at daytime表达在白天的意思。
同理，at nights会比 on the nights好些。
enter for 一般表示参加什么比赛活动之类的，直接用enter就ok啦
from start是从开始的意思，不知道您这里要表达的是“我想从零开始学起”还是“想从点滴开始”或其他意思。
feel sick是一个完整的短语结构，想加修饰的时候可以在其后面加in my stomach/on my neck之类的。
I wanted to go to the hospital to check up.以前的事，用过去时。
feel better now就好了，用now表达现在，不用进行时的，很多都是习惯问题。
need to do sth. 所以最后一个句子应该是I think maybe I need to take some rest.
About lately (近况)
What have you been up to?
I have been busy preparing for the PETS examination lately,which will be held on 14,Sep 2013.
I must keep on working during the days and looking after my baby at nights.
I have just entered an English class on the net-school. I am eager to learn English from the beginning.
The other day,I suddenly felt my neck of sick.I want to take a check in the hospital. But I was too busy and I am feeling better now. I think maybe I need take some rest.
我改了一些语法错误和表达不准确的地方，然后把一些简单句改成从句，有些表达方式也改了，这样显得地道些。希望你满意！
about lately 不能这么用吧 直接说my recent life
prepare后加个for
后面连一起老到点， preparing for the PETS examination which will be held on ...
during the day... at night
I have just attended an ...
from the start
I was supposed to go to hospital because my neck hurted the other day, but I was too occupied. Now I'm feeling much better, maybe I just need some rest.
About lately (近况)
What have you been up to?
I have been busy lately,I have been preparing (for) the PETS examination. It will be held on 14,Sep 2013.
I (have) to go to work (by)day and look after my baby (at) night.
I have just entered for an English class on the net. I want to learn English from (the very beginning).
The other day,I suddenly felt my neck sick.I want to (have it checked) in the hospital, but I was too busy. Now I am feeling better,I think maybe I need take some rest.
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