哪位英语高手帮我翻译一下这段对话,不要翻译器的,最好是地道的美语,谢谢

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请英语高手帮我翻译一下这段对话,地道美语,不要翻译器的,口语作业~

A: Excuse me, why are you late? What's your name?
B: My name is Mike, Sir/Miss*(1). You can't forget me just because I've been absent for four classes.*(2)
A: All right, Mike. Why were you absent for four classes?
B: The programming contest I participated in required me and seven other students in the same field*(3) to work in a workshop*(4) for twenty-seven days (consecutively). *(5)
A: That doesn't mean you can be absent without the knowledge of a teacher.*(6)

*(1) 男老师用Sir,女老师用Miss。英语中跟老师交谈时不会称对方为teacher——很多人都犯这个错误。
*(2) 瘦瘦的肉包子用户说得没错。为了好好表达出原句中的“就”,在because前加个just会比较好。
*(3)“专业译成”profession绝对不对——没有人会这样说的。因为不知道B上的是中学/大学还是别的,所以把“专业”译成field(区域)比较自然。
*(4) “机房”一词一时找不出什么好的意译……网上辞书都是译成equipment room、engine room、machine room、generator room之类的词。因为B参加的是个编程比赛,所以个人认为以上的翻译全部都不太合适。
Workshop有“工场”、“研究会”、“讲习会”等意思,我觉得比起网上辞书给的那些选择更显妥当。
*(5) 括号中的consecutively可要可不要。但为了原句中“连续”的关系还是放进去了。个人认为不要会比较自然和不啰嗦。
*(6) 英文中好像没有能清晰直接地代替“请假”的单词,因此有点麻烦……
翻译后的整句话语法和文法虽然都没问题,但因为跟原中文句子的意思有点偏差,所以我觉得还是不够完美——That doesn't mean you can be absent without the knowledge of a teacher. 直接翻译成中文后是:“这不代表你可以在老师不知情的情况下缺席。”
也可以译成:That doesn't excuse you from not notifying a teacher who's not aware of this. ——“这并不代表你可以不事先通知不知情的老师。”/"这并不能为你没事先向不知情的老师请假作借口。"——暂时想不出更自然的翻译了。
当然,肉包子用户的 It doesn't mean that you are allowed to be absent without the permission of teachers who don't know about *it*. 也可以(it 换成 this 更好)。但这样一来句子长度就比原句多出许多,而且有点不自然和啰嗦的感觉——这并不是翻译者的问题,怪也只能怪“请假”没有好的代替词。

现在的专业的要求之一就是用英文写论文(其余时间就是把其它外语译成英文)。个人较擅长翻译对话稿,喜用灵活自然的方法并常常乐在其中。所以可以肯定,这篇口语的翻译是没有问题的。但要完全一板一眼地把文字换过来的话就恐怕没可能了……
以上已经尽能力地解释了各处比较含糊的地方,希望能帮助到你。如有其他问题请随时PM我。
PS.还请各位高手明点出任何可改进的地方。见笑了。:-)

A;you have not contacted me for years,why come back instead of dispearing forever?
B:sorry,mary,please forgive my french goodbye。but nice to see you again。you look more haggard than before,always that busy?
A:yeah,i was not very well some time ago
B:you should have more rest. i heard from mark that you are leaving
A:do not ask so much just like you will care about that
希望能帮到你~~~O(∩_∩)O

A It seems that you have already made a new life goal
B Of course. The time is running, and people are growing up. However stupid a people used to be, he will be sober one day.
A But what's my life goal?
应该比较地道了。
还有问题追问哦亲~

A:看样子你已经有了新的人生目标
It seems to me that you have had new career.
B:那还用说,时间在走,人在长大,不管一个人以前有多愚蠢,总有清醒的一天。
Yes, of course. It is. Time is passing by and people are growing up and will be level-headed someday no matter how one was immature before.
A:可是我的人生目标又是什么呢
Well, what is mine?

A:It seems that you have got a new goal for your life.
B:Of course, we are growing up as time pass, it doesn't matter how stupid one used to be, he will eventually be awake some day.
A: But then what's my life goal?

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