请英语高手帮我看一下这段话的表达有哪些不合适和语法错误的，这是request letter
life is short, when time is passing by without being noticed by us, then our life is going to be ended, but have you ever thought about what are you going to do in this short life? fireworks has short life, but everyone remembers its flame, this can be called forever, our life is like the firework, please find out the important moment in our short life, and make it become forever.
何不改为【your mood is in the first place】微博上你可以分享很多东西，首当其冲的就是你的心情。比以上三种表达都好。
祝你比赛顺利，别紧张哈！
2。帮助很多学生上下课能方便快捷地从A校区到达B校区，
Our program will help many students who transport from A to B，这一句并没有表达出这个意思，
Our program will offer students convenience to transfer from A school to B school.
3。我也是这些需要在不同校区上课的学生之一
and I am one of the members who responsible for the budgeting our proposal for our program
这一句就有歧义了，那些学生也参加了方案预算？
4。请问你们有多余的流动现金可以支持我们吗
Do you have additional current asset that could provide us a little bit more of support?
不用那么麻烦吧，Do you have additional current asset to support us ?
你最好用中文写下，我帮你翻译还好点，你这个基本都有大问题。
Your product is being used by many students in our main campus and has a positive effect on our students. The purpose of the proposal is to help students go to Section A from Section B smoothly, and I am also one of the students who need take course among different campus section, as well as one of the responsible men for this proposal. Could you please be so kind to answer the questions below?
What time did it has the largest outcome in 2011?
What reward will you need if you accept our request?
Do you have extra current asset to support us?
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